advice

Liss · 05-04-2006, 05:32 PM

I'm entering this in a contest, cuz its a "light" verse contest and this is all i got to offer. Any suggestions would be appreciated.

The Wolf was Framed!

Wolf was a loyal dog, woman

Optimus Funk · 05-04-2006, 05:54 PM

I liked it, short and sweet oozing with wit and besides I always knew Little Red Riding Hood was guilty! I am just glad someone brought it out into the light. I would watch my back from now on though, or go into some protective custody cause word around the woods is that Littl' Miss Hood is a made woman and well "connected". Good luck in your contest, and your new life.

Just change en, to an evil leer :P

Liss · 05-04-2006, 05:59 PM

lol

i wanna know why the hell grammar check missed that.

fixed.

Optimus Funk · 05-04-2006, 07:13 PM

Cause someone (^) didn't want to spend the few extra bucks to get an Optimus powered spell checker...and then you dare to ask why?

thecreeper · 05-07-2006, 03:45 AM

i may have been drinking, but i enjoyed it.

Liss · 01-15-2007, 07:13 PM

Static

I want to conquer Europe
And the entire world

05-04-2006, 05:32 PM	#1
Liss hex can see my boobs Join Date: Dec 2004 Posts: 749	advice I'm entering this in a contest, cuz its a "light" verse contest and this is all i got to offer. Any suggestions would be appreciated. The Wolf was Framed! Wolf was a loyal dog, woman Last edited by Liss : 05-04-2006 at 06:01 PM.

05-04-2006, 05:54 PM	#2
Optimus Funk Member Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: Lancaster, PA Posts: 551	I liked it, short and sweet oozing with wit and besides I always knew Little Red Riding Hood was guilty! I am just glad someone brought it out into the light. I would watch my back from now on though, or go into some protective custody cause word around the woods is that Littl' Miss Hood is a made woman and well "connected". Good luck in your contest, and your new life. Just change en, to an evil leer :P __________________ "You ain't lived till you got head from a vampire!" Darius McCrary(better know as Eddie Winslow from family matters)to Jon Bon Jovi in Vampires: Los Muertos "MY LOVE FOR YOU IS LIKE A TRUCK, BERSERKER!, WOULD YOU LIKE SOME MAKING FUCK?, BERSERKER!"

05-04-2006, 05:59 PM	#3
Liss hex can see my boobs Join Date: Dec 2004 Posts: 749	lol i wanna know why the hell grammar check missed that. fixed. Last edited by Liss : 05-04-2006 at 06:01 PM.

05-07-2006, 03:45 AM	#5
thecreeper Administrator Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: Lancaster, PA Posts: 2,330	i may have been drinking, but i enjoyed it. __________________ good-evil.net - ahh, wade boggs...goes down smooth.

01-15-2007, 07:13 PM	#6
Liss hex can see my boobs Join Date: Dec 2004 Posts: 749	Criticism Desperately Needed Static I want to conquer Europe And the entire world